thunderclap — the darkening sky splits into liquid night
(Originally published in beyond the horizon beyond)
—Kala Ramesh
Issue 20.1 | 7 July 2020
Wonderful aural and visual image, Kala!
Peggy, Thanks a lot for your time. Happy you could relate to this ku. _()_
Love it, as usual!
approaching storm the boatman fingers his bowl
Thanks a ton, Martin Happy you 'love it'. Our Indian monsoon, which lasts for over two months, gives us such beautiful moments.
What a great image !! A very dynamic Ku with power packed words like thunderclap, split and liquid. It resounds in your mind long after you have read it . One of my all time favourite ku !!
Vidya,
Thanks a million. Lovely comment – something I go back to and feel good, when I'm in a rut! ^_^
I like the vivid imagery in this haiku!
Ramesh, Thank you so much for your comment. Your comment means so much to me. ^_^
Beautiful imagery. Really liked ?Liquid night?. So much left to the imagination.
Firdaus,
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. It's nice to know you are able to relate to this image. _()_
Liquid night….so lovely…brings d monsoon night right in front of the eyes
Thanks, Mallika. Happy you like the image in this ku.
..so lovely…brings d monsoon night right in front of the eyes
Great image! Very visual.
Thanks a ton, Sanjuktaa _()_
I'm a bit late in responding but remembered admiring this so much when I first read it in your book.
Marie, How are you? It's absolutely lovely meeting you here. Thank you so much,. Happy you like this ku. _()_
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July 7th, 2020 at 11:28 am
Wonderful aural and visual image, Kala!
July 7th, 2020 at 3:17 pm
Peggy,
Thanks a lot for your time.
Happy you could relate to this ku.
_()_
July 7th, 2020 at 11:45 am
Love it, as usual!
approaching storm
the boatman fingers his bowl
July 7th, 2020 at 3:16 pm
Thanks a ton, Martin
Happy you 'love it'.
Our Indian monsoon, which lasts for over two months, gives us such beautiful moments.
July 7th, 2020 at 5:32 pm
What a great image !! A very dynamic Ku with power packed words like thunderclap, split and liquid. It resounds in your mind long after you have read it . One of my all time favourite ku !!
July 7th, 2020 at 10:10 pm
Vidya,
Thanks a million.
Lovely comment – something I go back to and feel good, when I'm in a rut!
^_^
July 7th, 2020 at 6:05 pm
I like the vivid imagery in this haiku!
July 7th, 2020 at 10:08 pm
Ramesh,
Thank you so much for your comment.
Your comment means so much to me.
^_^
July 7th, 2020 at 11:14 pm
Beautiful imagery. Really liked ?Liquid night?. So much left to the imagination.
July 8th, 2020 at 6:20 am
Firdaus,
Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
It's nice to know you are able to relate to this image.
_()_
July 8th, 2020 at 12:53 am
Liquid night….so lovely…brings d monsoon night right in front of the eyes
July 8th, 2020 at 6:21 am
Thanks, Mallika.
Happy you like the image in this ku.
July 8th, 2020 at 12:54 am
..so lovely…brings d monsoon night right in front of the eyes
July 8th, 2020 at 6:56 am
Great image! Very visual.
July 8th, 2020 at 7:00 am
Great image! Very visual.
July 8th, 2020 at 10:47 am
Thanks a ton, Sanjuktaa _()_
July 10th, 2020 at 3:03 am
I'm a bit late in responding but remembered admiring this so much when I first read it in your book.
July 10th, 2020 at 3:11 am
Marie,
How are you?
It's absolutely lovely meeting you here.
Thank you so much,. Happy you like this ku.
_()_