the darkening sky splits
into liquid night
(Originally published in beyond the horizon beyond)
Issue 20.1 | 7 July 2020
Wonderful aural and visual image, Kala!
Thanks a lot for your time.
Happy you could relate to this ku.
Love it, as usual!
the boatman fingers his bowl
Thanks a ton, Martin
Happy you 'love it'.
Our Indian monsoon, which lasts for over two months, gives us such beautiful moments.
What a great image !! A very dynamic Ku with power packed words like thunderclap, split and liquid. It resounds in your mind long after you have read it . One of my all time favourite ku !!
Thanks a million.
Lovely comment – something I go back to and feel good, when I'm in a rut!
I like the vivid imagery in this haiku!
Thank you so much for your comment.
Your comment means so much to me.
Beautiful imagery. Really liked ‘Liquid night’. So much left to the imagination.
Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
It's nice to know you are able to relate to this image.
Liquid night….so lovely…brings d monsoon night right in front of the eyes
Happy you like the image in this ku.
..so lovely…brings d monsoon night right in front of the eyes
Great image! Very visual.
Thanks a ton, Sanjuktaa _()_
I'm a bit late in responding but remembered admiring this so much when I first read it in your book.
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It's absolutely lovely meeting you here.
Thank you so much,. Happy you like this ku.
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