telling me over and over the undertow
—Lorin Ford
Issue 20.1 | 22 July 2020
Lorin, I love this. It’s everything a good haiku/senryu should be: immersive and brief.
Very nice. A story lurking there in “undertow”.
This one really works!
Beautiful, Lorin. Spare, and precise but enigmatic, like so much of your work.
Very nice, Lorin. Agree with Lynne about your spare and precise but enigmatic work. Thank you.
ground swell the day moon draws closer
Been there, done that and could never have told as well as you! Best!
Hi, Lorin. I am a great admirer of your haiku and this one is no exception. Very nice!
This draws me in like an undertow.
Very moving, haunting and so applicable to our time of covid.
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July 22nd, 2020 at 9:21 am
Lorin, I love this. It’s everything a good haiku/senryu should be: immersive and brief.
July 22nd, 2020 at 9:30 am
Very nice. A story lurking there in “undertow”.
July 22nd, 2020 at 9:41 am
This one really works!
July 22nd, 2020 at 10:30 am
Beautiful, Lorin. Spare, and precise but enigmatic, like so much of your work.
July 22nd, 2020 at 11:49 am
Very nice, Lorin. Agree with Lynne about your spare and precise but enigmatic work.
Thank you.
July 22nd, 2020 at 11:50 am
ground swell
the day moon draws closer
July 22nd, 2020 at 11:54 am
Been there, done that and could never have told as well as you! Best!
July 22nd, 2020 at 6:11 pm
Hi, Lorin. I am a great admirer of your haiku and this one is no exception. Very nice!
July 23rd, 2020 at 2:28 am
This draws me in like an undertow.
July 23rd, 2020 at 5:51 am
Very moving, haunting and so applicable to our time of covid.