telling me over and over the undertow
Issue 20.1 | 22 July 2020
Lorin, I love this. It’s everything a good haiku/senryu should be: immersive and brief.
Very nice. A story lurking there in “undertow”.
This one really works!
Beautiful, Lorin. Spare, and precise but enigmatic, like so much of your work.
Very nice, Lorin. Agree with Lynne about your spare and precise but enigmatic work.
the day moon draws closer
Been there, done that and could never have told as well as you! Best!
Hi, Lorin. I am a great admirer of your haiku and this one is no exception. Very nice!
This draws me in like an undertow.
Very moving, haunting and so applicable to our time of covid.
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