on the lake
water striders

5 Responses

  1. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Humans and insects — we all share the same core needs. Love this haiku!

  2. mary jo Says:

    I like it too. Water striders are such fun to watch as well.

  3. David Gross Says:

    Fine work.

  4. Lynne Rees Says:

    Simplicity and craft – lovely, Jeff. A really enjoyable minimalist haiku that, for me, would work well as a one liner too.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Ha! I love how this could be either the human observer or the water strider who is dining on the lake….a moment well captured, Jeff. :)


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