dining on the lake water striders
—Jeff Hoagland
Issue 20.1 | 29 July 2020
Humans and insects — we all share the same core needs. Love this haiku!
I like it too. Water striders are such fun to watch as well.
Fine work.
Simplicity and craft – lovely, Jeff. A really enjoyable minimalist haiku that, for me, would work well as a one liner too.
Ha! I love how this could be either the human observer or the water strider who is dining on the lake….a moment well captured, Jeff. :)
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July 29th, 2020 at 10:40 am
Humans and insects — we all share the same core needs. Love this haiku!
July 29th, 2020 at 11:37 am
I like it too. Water striders are such fun to watch as well.
July 29th, 2020 at 11:53 am
Fine work.
July 29th, 2020 at 11:54 am
Simplicity and craft – lovely, Jeff. A really enjoyable minimalist haiku that, for me, would work well as a one liner too.
August 10th, 2020 at 5:07 am
Ha! I love how this could be either the human observer or the water strider who is dining on the lake….a moment well captured, Jeff. :)
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