An interesting take on death and its post-life process seen before death. The lower case personal pronouns could suggest someone becoming humble in the forgone conclusion of death. After all the second we are born the only definite thing is death, even before taxes kick in.
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dead sparrow
how light the evening
comes to a close
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November 3rd, 2020 at 12:05 pm
gradually
i resemble the corpse
i will be
—VIJAY PRASAD
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An interesting take on death and its post-life process seen before death. The lower case personal pronouns could suggest someone becoming humble in the forgone conclusion of death. After all the second we are born the only definite thing is death, even before taxes kick in.
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dead sparrow
how light the evening
comes to a close
Alan Summers
Haiku Canada Review, vol. 11, no. 2, (October 2017) ed. LeRoy Gorman
November 4th, 2020 at 12:46 pm
looking down
as an old worry
to my feet
the child dreams about
the length of his life
November 10th, 2020 at 3:38 am
Nice poem, Vijay.
January 22nd, 2021 at 10:15 pm
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