i resemble the corpse
i will be



4 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    i resemble the corpse
    i will be



    An interesting take on death and its post-life process seen before death. The lower case personal pronouns could suggest someone becoming humble in the forgone conclusion of death. After all the second we are born the only definite thing is death, even before taxes kick in.


    dead sparrow
    how light the evening
    comes to a close

    Alan Summers
    Haiku Canada Review, vol. 11, no. 2, (October 2017) ed. LeRoy Gorman

  2. martin1223 Says:

    looking down
    as an old worry
    to my feet
    the child dreams about
    the length of his life

  3. kalaramesh Says:

    Nice poem, Vijay.

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