crowded café
a fly goes in and out
of our conversation

 

 

 

6 Responses

  1. Nancy Rapp Says:

    Your haiku is delightful. I’ve been there before.

  2. Andrea Says:

    Beautiful!

  3. MaryJo Says:

    What a fun haiku as opposed to the actual fly in and out of the conversation. Next time, I'll re-frame
    our three-way conversation.

  4. Peggy Hale Bilbro Says:

    What a wonderful pre-Covid memory! I love a crowded cafe with the sound of enthusiastic people and cutlery tapping and even a few nosy flies! Please spare me and the fly loud music!

  5. martin1223 Says:

    Liked it!

    How many times I would try to impress a beautiful young woman as a fly showed me flailing about in our conversation.

    still rubbing his hands together old Issa

  6. Lynne Rees Says:

    I love this, Bob. The weaving path of the fly set against the pattern of conversation… and the suggestion of 'things' being returned to by this image… it packs in so much. Wonderful.

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