new sheets on a new bed a new loneliness
—Ben Gaa
Issue 20.2 | 5 January 2021
this one packs so much feeling. lovely yet sad.
Love this one, Ben. Thank you for writing it.
What a beautiful and powerful example of how repetition can be used effectively in a short poem.
Who doesn?t love new sheets? Ah, but not when they?re on a cold, new bed filled with loneliness. Love your use of repetition here, Ben.
marion
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January 5th, 2021 at 8:33 am
this one packs so much feeling. lovely yet sad.
January 5th, 2021 at 9:06 am
Love this one, Ben. Thank you for writing it.
January 6th, 2021 at 1:46 am
What a beautiful and powerful example of how repetition can be used effectively in a short poem.
January 8th, 2021 at 12:48 am
Who doesn?t love new sheets? Ah, but not when they?re on a cold, new bed filled with loneliness. Love your use of repetition here, Ben.
marion