morning heat
the neighbor packs down
his cigarettes
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Bryan Rickert
Bryan lives with his family in Southern Illinois and has degrees in art and education. He has been studying and writing the Japanese short poetry forms since 2012 and been published in many fine journals and anthologies. His first book Fish Kite is now available on Amazon and the Cyberwit website.
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Oh wow–I got a sense of annoyance and frustration here… and of course the heat doesn't help` Not sure if this was what you'd intended, but well done, Bryan.
Oh wow–I got a sense of annoyance and frustration here… and of course the heat doesn't help` Not sure if this was what you'd intended, but well done, Bryan.
marion
Good one .. all cigarettes should be packed down