first daffodil forever the show-off
—Marion Clarke
Issue 21.1 | 25 March 2021
Ah, yes, some flowers show off, as do some people. What came first, the chicken or the egg, the daffodil or the author? ;-)
I love the edginess behind the beguilingly simple but not so simple haiku.
warm regards, Alan
Love it!
flowers just bloom
child like flowers the more you tinkle the more they laugh
? Bidyut prabha
'edginess' :) Clever and effective, Marion. Very nice!
runners high the daffodils incandescence
For some reason I am unable to respond to individual posts, so thank you Alan, Hemapriya, Ram, Bidyut, Norman and Dawn. ?
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March 25th, 2021 at 9:11 am
Ah, yes, some flowers show off, as do some people. What came first, the chicken or the egg, the daffodil or the author? ;-)
I love the edginess behind the beguilingly simple but not so simple haiku.
warm regards,
Alan
March 26th, 2021 at 1:41 am
Love it!
March 26th, 2021 at 7:25 am
flowers
just
bloom
March 26th, 2021 at 7:57 am
child like flowers
the more you tinkle
the more they laugh
? Bidyut prabha
March 26th, 2021 at 12:37 pm
'edginess' :) Clever and effective, Marion. Very nice!
March 27th, 2021 at 5:43 am
runners high
the daffodils
incandescence
August 9th, 2021 at 3:11 pm
For some reason I am unable to respond to individual posts, so thank you Alan, Hemapriya, Ram, Bidyut, Norman and Dawn. ?
marion