first rays of sun
on morning frost . . .
I’ll catch the next train


5 Responses

  1. Guy Stephenson Says:

    I love how the last line negates our modern, urban hurry and speaks up for contemplation.

  2. parishaiku Says:

    How often do we miss the beauty of morning sun as we rush off to work? Sigh. <3

  3. Karen Harvey Says:

    She took the time to 'Stop and stare.' Delightful.

  4. magyar Says:

    stepping beyond
    as this internet lingers
    a new day

  5. Robert kingston Says:

    A wonderful poem!

    tea leaves
    in the cup bottom
    wiped clean

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