cactus blossoms holding on to hope

 

 

9 Responses

  1. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    Lovely! hank you, Lesley & tiny words!

  2. Marilyn Says:

    Not hank you but thank you!!!

  3. Meik Blttenberger Says:

    Wonderful haiku and what I need to always do!

  4. Magyar Says:

    Humming bird; this promise of tomorrow; natures bloom.

    __ Grand Lesley! A minute echo. _m

  5. BDNT Says:

    Phenomenal monoku!
    —BDNT—

  6. Lynne Rees Says:

    There is such simple beauty and painful honesty in your haiku, Lesley Ann – the cactus is blossoming yet I can still feel the presence/pain of its needles. And I really like the repetition of 'O' through the haiku as well – it shapes the mouth into an expression of 'oh' which is perhaps how we feel when we're hoping for comfort and relief. So lovely.

  7. Lesley Says:

    thanks Lynne!
    and to all of you — happy it resonated.

  8. Christy Olson Says:

    We have so many “hope blossoms” here and in every color! Glad Lynne pointed out the “o” repetition. Miss you. clo

  9. annie soerensen Says:

    Ginny of our Haiku Workshop sent us this. Today i read about the concern about Saguaro cacti being covered with blossoms. Fears of a sign of stress.Has this informed your haiku?Thanks for this Annie, Denver CO

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