hammock time a neighbor?s lawnmower cuts it short
—Tim Cremin
Issue 21.1 | 25 May 2021
I should have caught the similarity sooner. Below is Dave Read's poem published in The Heron's Nest, December 2020:
afternoon nap… a lawnmower cuts it short
— DAVE READ
Clearly Cremin's poem is a coincidental case of de'ja' KU which happens sometimes.
Wow–uncanny how similar–I had to go back and check my records to make sure I didn't inadvertently lift Dave's haiku. I am relieved to see my haiku in my journal from October 2020.
I know it doesn?t say this, but I keep seeing the strings of the hammock being cut! ?
Amusing ku.
marion
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May 27th, 2021 at 2:28 pm
I should have caught the similarity sooner. Below is Dave Read's poem published in The Heron's Nest, December 2020:
afternoon nap…
a lawnmower
cuts it short
— DAVE READ
Clearly Cremin's poem is a coincidental case of de'ja' KU which happens sometimes.
June 4th, 2021 at 8:40 pm
Wow–uncanny how similar–I had to go back and check my records to make sure I didn't inadvertently lift Dave's haiku. I am relieved to see my haiku in my journal from October 2020.
June 8th, 2021 at 2:08 am
I know it doesn?t say this, but I keep seeing the strings of the hammock being cut! ?
Amusing ku.
marion