age spots
I no longer talk
with my hands

6 Responses

  1. Liz Says:

    Really liked your poem reminded me of my grandmother and I am not far behind some of those aged spots are surfacing on my hands !

    Another to compliment yours along the same theme

    twiddling her thumbs
    back and forth
    age spots in motion

  2. sekiro/ stanford m. forrester Says:

    wonderful poem. a new classic! thank you for writing it and sharing it.

  3. Gregory Longenecker Says:

    I can relate. You’ve captured that feeling perfectly.

  4. Valentina Says:

    well written

  5. Magyar Says:

    __ Ah yes,! So well, seen, thought and felt Joanne; each moment's mark of time! _m

    time's written
    each moment check marked
    parchment skin

  6. Joanne Morcom Says:

    Thanks for your comments!!

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