The syntax (and monoku layout) sort of falls off the edge… It's an unexpected ending, and especially effective for that. Also unexpected because love is usually associated with spring, not autumn, although some (like me) see autumn as a generative time… a great time to plant things, start school, fall in love… thanks for the haiku!
August 18th, 2021 at 9:05 am
How sweet!
August 18th, 2021 at 10:42 am
I really like it. Well done!
August 18th, 2021 at 12:00 pm
The syntax (and monoku layout) sort of falls off the edge… It's an unexpected ending, and especially effective for that. Also unexpected because love is usually associated with spring, not autumn, although some (like me) see autumn as a generative time… a great time to plant things, start school, fall in love… thanks for the haiku!
August 18th, 2021 at 6:18 pm
Thanks, Bryan for this lovely haiku.
August 18th, 2021 at 6:27 pm
So short, sweet and unexpected !!
Wonderful !!
August 19th, 2021 at 6:15 am
The element of surprise and the obscurity immaticully preseved, are the key factors making it great!
Well done Bryan!