straightening
the dog-eared pages
end of summer

 

2 Responses

  1. Guy Stephenson Says:

    I like that. It brings back memories of many summer moments—and of many books read. The poignancy too.

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    Wonderful haiku!

    straightening
    the dog-eared pages
    end of summer

    —Debbi Antebi

    Great opening phrase to a haiku, both very atmosphere, and a change from a single line opening a haiku followed by a phrase. Wonder tension between the two parts and as Guy said, the poignancy too, and understated but flowing through the poem.

    I only have this autumn haiku to do with the pages of a book!

    fallen leaves
    the pages of a book
    form a rain cloud

    Alan Summers
    Contiguous haibun
    Narrow Road Vol 3 December 2017

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