This one-liner is sufficiently open to invite the reader to interpret it in several ways. It suggested a narrative to me—I imagined someone had just walked out of a house following an argument, slamming the door and unsettling the wind chimes. Is this a one-off or the beginning of a pattern?
Thanks so much for taking the time to comment on this monoku, Marion. Your interpretation is interesting and welcome, though somewhat different that the actual story behind it. That's fine with me!
November 3rd, 2021 at 11:28 am
Susan, I like your linking of the rambling tinkling of wind chimes to the odds of repetition. Something to ponder. Works well as a monoku.
Take care.
Dan
November 3rd, 2021 at 4:02 pm
Thanks a lot, Dan, for your kind words. So glad you enjoyed this monoku!
November 6th, 2021 at 2:39 am
This one-liner is sufficiently open to invite the reader to interpret it in several ways. It suggested a narrative to me—I imagined someone had just walked out of a house following an argument, slamming the door and unsettling the wind chimes. Is this a one-off or the beginning of a pattern?
Thank you for sharing this, Susan.
marion
November 6th, 2021 at 3:50 pm
Thanks so much for taking the time to comment on this monoku, Marion. Your interpretation is interesting and welcome, though somewhat different that the actual story behind it. That's fine with me!