she denies it all wind through the tips of pines
—David Watts
Issue 21.2 | 4 November 2021
A wonderfully cinematic and poignant haiku. Remarkable on so many levels!
Sharon
So evocative!
Oh wow! The fact that it’s the wind through the “tips of the pines”made me think of the “skin of your teeth” … this person has got away with something … just!
It’s kind of noir for me, like a Coen brothers film.
marion
Belated ditto!
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November 4th, 2021 at 12:30 pm
A wonderfully cinematic and poignant haiku. Remarkable on so many levels!
Sharon
November 4th, 2021 at 1:24 pm
So evocative!
November 6th, 2021 at 12:39 pm
Oh wow! The fact that it’s the wind through the “tips of the pines”made me think of the “skin of your teeth” … this person has got away with something … just!
It’s kind of noir for me, like a Coen brothers film.
marion
November 30th, 2021 at 4:45 pm
Belated ditto!