she denies it all
wind through the tips
of pines


4 Responses

  1. sharon johnson Says:

    A wonderfully cinematic and poignant haiku. Remarkable on so many levels!


  2. Sheila Sondik Says:

    So evocative!

  3. Marion Clarke Says:

    Oh wow! The fact that it’s the wind through the “tips of the pines”made me think of the “skin of your teeth” … this person has got away with something … just!

    It’s kind of noir for me, like a Coen brothers film.


  4. martin1223 Says:

    Belated ditto!

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