autumn surf
a flutter of terns almost lands
then lifts away


6 Responses

  1. Mary Stevens Says:

    Beautiful image and sounds, Hannah!

  2. Hannah Mahoney Says:

    Thank so much, Mary!

  3. Guy Stephenson Says:

    Powerful. I can hear their wings.

  4. Hannah Mahoney Says:

    Thank you, Guy! I appreciate the comment!

  5. Magyar Says:

    wings thunder
    as dry leaf clouds swirl
    brown geese

    __ Hannah; this, is my humble echo… . _m

  6. Hannah Mahoney Says:

    Lovely! Thank you for the response verse!

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