old chihuahua what can you teach me about the dew
all I see are moonsets spread over the morning field
(Note: This is a tan renga by Kala Ramesh and Billie Dee)
—Billie Dee
Issue 21.2 | 7 February 2022
How beautiful – Kala and Dev. Moonsets – wow !!
Thanks, Vidya. The top verse which is so beautiful is Billie's, and the bottom one is mine. My first attempt at tan-renga. All thanks to Billie.
Love it!
Thanks, Gabriel. _()_
old chihuahua and the dew… very light touch – karumi! . I love how in my mind, the dew drops become moon sets in the waki. Lovely work Billie and Kala
Thanks a ton, Mary. Kind of you to take time off to post your feedback. _()_
I just love this – so evocative and gentle. And ambiguous. (Is chihuahua a wise old dog, or a timeless place?). Well done.
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February 7th, 2022 at 9:43 am
How beautiful – Kala and Dev. Moonsets – wow !!
February 7th, 2022 at 3:03 pm
Thanks, Vidya.
The top verse which is so beautiful is Billie's, and the bottom one is mine.
My first attempt at tan-renga.
All thanks to Billie.
February 7th, 2022 at 10:04 am
Love it!
February 7th, 2022 at 3:05 pm
Thanks, Gabriel.
_()_
February 7th, 2022 at 10:58 pm
old chihuahua and the dew… very light touch – karumi! . I love how in my mind, the dew drops become moon sets in the waki. Lovely work Billie and Kala
February 7th, 2022 at 11:22 pm
Thanks a ton, Mary.
Kind of you to take time off to post your feedback.
_()_
February 8th, 2022 at 4:55 am
I just love this – so evocative and gentle. And ambiguous. (Is chihuahua a wise old dog, or a timeless place?). Well done.