old chihuahua
what can you teach me
about the dew
all I see are moonsets
spread over the morning field
(Note: This is a tan renga by Kala Ramesh and Billie Dee)
old chihuahua
what can you teach me
about the dew
all I see are moonsets
spread over the morning field
(Note: This is a tan renga by Kala Ramesh and Billie Dee)
How beautiful – Kala and Dev. Moonsets – wow !!
Thanks, Vidya.
The top verse which is so beautiful is Billie's, and the bottom one is mine.
My first attempt at tan-renga.
All thanks to Billie.
Love it!
Thanks, Gabriel.
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old chihuahua and the dew… very light touch – karumi! . I love how in my mind, the dew drops become moon sets in the waki. Lovely work Billie and Kala
Thanks a ton, Mary.
Kind of you to take time off to post your feedback.
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I just love this – so evocative and gentle. And ambiguous. (Is chihuahua a wise old dog, or a timeless place?). Well done.