falling leaves a chorus of chainsaws in the mockingbird’s song
(Originally published on Nick Virgilio Haiku Association’s ‘Haiku in Action’ blog, Nov 2021)
—Tracy Davidson
Issue 22.1 | 20 April 2022
I love this. I really like how the "falling" in the first line is picked up (and given a twist) by the "chainsaws" in the second. Even the extending line lengths seem to accentuate the idea of falling.
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April 20th, 2022 at 10:38 am
I love this. I really like how the "falling" in the first line is picked up (and given a twist) by the "chainsaws" in the second. Even the extending line lengths seem to accentuate the idea of falling.