stepping stones
in the river
the choices we make

 

 

(Under the Basho, November 2019)

 

4 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    __ Each day… we face another river to cross; so well seen, Jill_!

    mossy stones
    when river crossings taunt
    eyes gauge steps

    _m

  2. Mayyar Says:

    __ Gauge… is measure.

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    stepping stones
    in the river
    the choices we make

    —Jill Lange
    Under the Basho (November 2019)

    Choices and flowing water, the alchemy in all of us.

    Lovely haiku!

    *

    those who stop —
    ducks taking colour
    from the river

    Alan Summers

    brass bell: a haiku journal
    curated by Zee Zahava (January 2017)

  4. martin1223 Says:

    Thank You for your poem!

    *

    repentance a loaf of bread floats by

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