green paddy fields our walk ends in a cup of sake
—Alvin Cruz
Issue 22.1 | 1 July 2022
This poem strikes me as potentially problematic.
I liked this poem for being nicely rounded off…a walk by rice fields followed by a drink made of fermented rice. There is a sense of peace and achievement in its simplicity.
Wouldn’t it be nice to have some fermented rice? One cup would suffice!
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July 1st, 2022 at 12:52 pm
This poem strikes me as potentially problematic.
July 1st, 2022 at 10:40 pm
I liked this poem for being nicely rounded off…a walk by rice fields followed by a drink made of fermented rice. There is a sense of peace and achievement in its simplicity.
August 22nd, 2022 at 5:33 am
Wouldn’t it be nice
to have some fermented rice?
One cup would suffice!