green paddy fields
our walk ends
in a cup of sake

3 Responses

  1. Zachary Bos Says:

    This poem strikes me as potentially problematic.

  2. ingridbaluchi Says:

    I liked this poem for being nicely rounded off…a walk by rice fields followed by a drink made of fermented rice. There is a sense of peace and achievement in its simplicity.

  3. Alan Says:

    Wouldn’t it be nice
    to have some fermented rice?
    One cup would suffice!

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