garden party an evening breeze combs the willow
—Sondra J. Byrnes
Issue 22.2 | 12 December 2022
Beautiful 😍
'combs' is just the right word here to describe the willow's tresses. Brings to mind lazy days floating down the river Cam in Cambridge, in a boat propelled by a university student earning a bit of pocket money.
willowy waters a punt slides by trailing fingers
I enjoyed the beautiful garden party haiku, Sondra and then the response brings back memories too.
On a dreary day in WI, this was most uplifting.
Beautiful!! Congratulations dear ..
Lovely moment! So finely crafted.
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December 12th, 2022 at 9:46 am
Beautiful 😍
December 12th, 2022 at 10:54 am
'combs' is just the right word here to describe the willow's tresses. Brings to mind lazy days floating down the river Cam in Cambridge, in a boat propelled by a university student earning a bit of pocket money.
willowy waters
a punt slides by
trailing fingers
December 12th, 2022 at 2:30 pm
I enjoyed the beautiful garden party haiku, Sondra and then the response brings back memories too.
On a dreary day in WI, this was most uplifting.
December 12th, 2022 at 2:53 pm
Beautiful!!
Congratulations dear ..
December 12th, 2022 at 8:51 pm
Lovely moment! So finely crafted.