spring melt
snow moving out of
its silence


7 Responses

  1. Greg Longenecker Says:

    Gary, I love the way you’ve referred to the sound of snowmelt without saying it. By doing so, there’s a mysterious Taoist feeling in your haiku. Wonderful!

  2. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    Wonderful! So lyrical!

  3. Mary Jo Says:

    Wonderfully said, Gary.

  4. mlkwriter Says:

    I really love this one that includes the senses of sight, sound, touch. Great Aha! Moment

  5. Magyar Says:

    warming nature
    emits each rivers song
    hidden wand

    My humble echo. _m

  6. Nancy Rapp Says:

    This also took me to the silence of snow and so clever to contrast this. Love it!

  7. Dawn Apanius Says:

    Brings many good feelings and memories.

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