spring melt snow moving out of its silence
—Gary Hotham
Issue 23.1 | 31 March 2023
Gary, I love the way you’ve referred to the sound of snowmelt without saying it. By doing so, there’s a mysterious Taoist feeling in your haiku. Wonderful!
Wonderful! So lyrical!
Wonderfully said, Gary.
I really love this one that includes the senses of sight, sound, touch. Great Aha! Moment
warming nature emits each rivers song hidden wand
My humble echo. _m
This also took me to the silence of snow and so clever to contrast this. Love it!
Brings many good feelings and memories.
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March 31st, 2023 at 1:16 pm
Gary, I love the way you’ve referred to the sound of snowmelt without saying it. By doing so, there’s a mysterious Taoist feeling in your haiku. Wonderful!
March 31st, 2023 at 1:18 pm
Wonderful! So lyrical!
March 31st, 2023 at 1:37 pm
Wonderfully said, Gary.
March 31st, 2023 at 2:00 pm
I really love this one that includes the senses of sight, sound, touch. Great Aha! Moment
March 31st, 2023 at 3:53 pm
warming nature
emits each rivers song
hidden wand
My humble echo. _m
March 31st, 2023 at 5:30 pm
This also took me to the silence of snow and so clever to contrast this. Love it!
March 31st, 2023 at 6:22 pm
Brings many good feelings and memories.