Mountain scree…normally shale, flat layers of compressed rock, difficult to walk upwards on as every step tends to slide one backwards. One step forward, two steps back. But here in this haiku, I take it that each step brings on a memory, a déjà vu experience, usually comforting.
April 27th, 2023 at 9:14 am
The juncture and memory with the scree is so nice.
April 27th, 2023 at 9:51 am
(The juncture OF memory…)
April 27th, 2023 at 10:01 am
The new word "scree" makes this poetic sentence. Nice end word selection.
April 27th, 2023 at 12:57 pm
Brilliant!!
April 27th, 2023 at 1:09 pm
Scree is a word for loose rocks on a mountain slope. Difficult to walk through since each step forward seems to take you two steps back.
April 27th, 2023 at 1:19 pm
Wonderful!
April 28th, 2023 at 1:36 pm
Mountain scree…normally shale, flat layers of compressed rock, difficult to walk upwards on as every step tends to slide one backwards. One step forward, two steps back. But here in this haiku, I take it that each step brings on a memory, a déjà vu experience, usually comforting.
May 4th, 2023 at 9:33 am
If you are not careful, memories could be painful. Enjoyed your poem!