finding another way    new snow along the forked branches of the pine


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  1. LYNNE REES Says:

    So beautifully precise and vivid. And I like how the images come after the statement… rather than the other way around. If they'd come first then the statement would have felt like an explanation of them. This way my mind travels along the branches, with the snow, and out into the air and the world around. Really lovely.

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