echocardiogram the underwater singing of my heart
—Marianne Paul
Issue 23.1 | 28 July 2023
I love Marianne Paul's poem…I just had a echocardiogram so it really spoke to me. Great job!
Excellenthaiku Marianne. It captures the the nature of the heart.
What an utter sublimely beautiful phrase, something I love in haiku, thank you!
Alan
I have never heard this condition ever described so beautifully. A memorable haiku Marianne.
Lovely!
well, this will be my thought from now on, while being tested…
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July 28th, 2023 at 12:56 pm
I love Marianne Paul's poem…I just had a echocardiogram so it really spoke to me. Great job!
July 28th, 2023 at 12:56 pm
Excellenthaiku Marianne. It captures the the nature of the heart.
July 28th, 2023 at 2:15 pm
echocardiogram
the underwater singing
of my heart
—Marianne Paul
What an utter sublimely beautiful phrase, something I love in haiku, thank you!
Alan
July 28th, 2023 at 2:22 pm
echocardiogram
the underwater singing
of my heart
I have never heard this condition ever described so beautifully. A memorable haiku Marianne.
July 28th, 2023 at 6:27 pm
Lovely!
July 29th, 2023 at 8:08 am
well, this will be my thought from now on, while being tested…