early dusk the song of a lark becomes rain
—Joanne van Helvoort
Issue 23.2 | 13 October 2023
Excellent haiku! The transformational sequence of the stimuli from the visual (dusk) to sound (lark's song) to sight & sound combined in the rain is done transparently with no seams showing the artist's work.
This is just beautiful!
A beautiful moment captured.
marion
Most beautifully worded.
Sometimes words just tumble into place like a lock click.
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October 13th, 2023 at 1:27 pm
Excellent haiku! The transformational sequence of the stimuli from the visual (dusk) to sound (lark's song) to sight & sound combined in the rain is done transparently with no seams showing the artist's work.
October 13th, 2023 at 1:47 pm
This is just beautiful!
October 13th, 2023 at 2:10 pm
A beautiful moment captured.
marion
October 13th, 2023 at 8:57 pm
Most beautifully worded.
October 27th, 2023 at 9:07 pm
Sometimes words just tumble into place
like a lock click.