early dusk
the song of a lark
becomes rain


5 Responses

  1. Bill Cullen Says:

    Excellent haiku! The transformational sequence of the stimuli from the visual (dusk) to sound (lark's song) to sight & sound combined in the rain is done transparently with no seams showing the artist's work.

  2. martin1223 Says:

    This is just beautiful!

  3. Marion Clarke Says:

    A beautiful moment captured.


  4. Kala Ramesh Says:

    Most beautifully worded.

  5. darius s. Says:

    Sometimes words just tumble into place
    like a lock click.

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