on dancing Shiva
                the guardian
of a ruined temple


6 Responses

  1. Anju Kishore Says:

    Evocative image, Kala.

  2. kalaramesh Says:

    Thanks, Anju.
    I'm happy you like it.
    I've brought in sabi here—that of rust, patina, loneliness, solitaryness, age, and insight.

  3. Milan Rajkumar Says:

    A sublime poem with the mystique quality of ancient India. Congratulations #masterji, Kala Ramesh! 👍

  4. kalaramesh Says:

    Thanks a lot, Milan.

  5. Marion Clarke Says:

    I like the imagery and shape of this poem, Kala.


  6. kalaramesh Says:

    Thank you so much, Marion.
    I worked 'sabi' into this ku and I'm happy it caught your attention.

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