snow-covered logs
right where the river
left them


4 Responses

  1. Michele Rule Says:

    Delightful image – well done!

  2. John S Green Says:

    beautiful poem.

    It has a strong Japanese esthetic feel

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  4. darius s. Says:

    not stepping on dandelions
    .. the life i value
    by prettiness

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