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9 Responses

1. Mike Says:
   April 25th, 2024 at 9:50 am

   Impressive verse! Entirely evokes the moment.

   🙇🏻‍♂️

2. Mary Jo Balistreri Says:
   April 25th, 2024 at 10:20 am

   Kala.
   the transformation of the viewer, sky, whale–all one. A vivid description of Zoka, and your response by writing the haiku.

   Jo

3. Debbie Says:
   April 25th, 2024 at 12:30 pm

   So so wonderful! I could see it!

4. Bruce Feingold Says:
   April 25th, 2024 at 12:54 pm

   Wonderful expansive and thrilling haiku!

5. Kala Ramesh Says:
   April 25th, 2024 at 2:53 pm

   Thanks, Mike,
   I’m happy this ku evokes the moment for you.

6. Kala Ramesh Says:
   April 25th, 2024 at 2:55 pm

   Thanks a lot, Mary.
   Nice to read what you’ve said: the transformation of the viewer, sky, whale–all one.

7. Kala Ramesh Says:
   April 25th, 2024 at 2:56 pm

   Thanks a ton, Debbie.

8. Kala Ramesh Says:
   April 25th, 2024 at 6:35 pm

   Dear Mary, Mike and Debbie,

   Thanks a lot for your positive comments.
   I felt good.

9. Barbara Sabol Says:
   April 26th, 2024 at 6:27 am

   The exclamation point works so well here to capture the sense of amazement and creates that “split second” of thrill. The haiku takes us there. Congrats!

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