humpback whale! for a split-second the sky steps back
(Originally published in Presence Haiku Journal #76, July 2023)
—Kala Ramesh
Issue 24.1 | 25 April 2024
Impressive verse! Entirely evokes the moment.
🙇🏻♂️
Kala. the transformation of the viewer, sky, whale–all one. A vivid description of Zoka, and your response by writing the haiku.
Jo
So so wonderful! I could see it!
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April 25th, 2024 at 9:50 am
Impressive verse! Entirely evokes the moment.
🙇🏻♂️
April 25th, 2024 at 10:20 am
Kala.
the transformation of the viewer, sky, whale–all one. A vivid description of Zoka, and your response by writing the haiku.
Jo
April 25th, 2024 at 12:30 pm
So so wonderful! I could see it!