Footnote
In college, I took a course on the Old Testament. The professor could read seventeen dead Near Eastern languages and talk about Sir Izaak Walton and fly fishing for hours. He encouraged his students to get lost in the footnotes. I’m still trying to find my way out.
late shift
the endless expanse
of the parking lot
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Bob Lucky
Bob Lucky lives Saudi Arabia, where he teaches and edits Contemporary Haibun Online.His work has appeared and is forthcoming in various journals including Modern Haiku, tinywords, Rattle, Flash, KYSO Flash, Presence, Haibun Today, and others. He's the author of Ethiopian Time (Red Bird Chapbooks) and Conversation Starters in a Language No One Speaks (SurVision Books).
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Very evocative memories that set off some of my own younger days. And then comes
“the endless expanse
of the parking lot”
trailing off into an endless future.
Thanks!
I like everything about this haibun very much, except the title. It repeats in the key line of the prose and that is a detraction. I’ve taken up with the approach of using title, prose, and haiku to all slant away from each other with only a subtle connection. This makes it more interesting. I love the haiku in relation to the prose.
the in and the out and the in and the possible out
Consummate Lucky
Love it!
Just love this haibun.
Too good, Bob
haibun of the year.
– T56
Love this!
Excellent, Bob! I especially like the way the meaning of the title changes after the haiku!
Sincere thanks to everyone for the kind words.
Good one! I’ve always liked your sense of humour, Bob.