end-stage…
the scent of rain
before it falls

 

4 Responses

  1. Michelle Says:

    Exquisite. Thank you for this.

  2. Barbara Sabol Says:

    Perfect comparison of the internal and external experiences. Thank you for this stunning poem.

  3. Alma Cole Pesiri Says:

    painful, beautiful, so much expressed in so few words!

  4. Kathabela Wilson Says:

    Thus is a beautiful haiku that lingers…I am reading it in the moist Asian tropical world rld on our travels where it is always almost about to rain!I can feel the presence! Thank you!

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