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12 Responses

1. Ingrid Baluchi Says:
   November 18th, 2024 at 9:29 am

   Sad and beautiful, and an unexpected last line indicating life goes on.

2. Barrie Says:
   November 18th, 2024 at 10:37 am

   Thank you so much Ingrid for your appreciation of my poem ….

3. Jo Balistreri Says:
   November 18th, 2024 at 11:57 am

   All of the above that Ingrid said.
   I thought how beautiful that life goes on and will bloom again.

4. Sarah Russell Says:
   November 18th, 2024 at 12:20 pm

   Perfect!

5. Deb Feller Says:
   November 18th, 2024 at 12:25 pm

   Thank you, Barrie! This really speaks to me!

6. Jeremy Pendrey Says:
   November 18th, 2024 at 12:48 pm

   Man, that’s good. We lost our 15-year old dog earlier this year, so it definitely hits home. Good to be reminded that it’s a cycle. We all are part of it.

7. Janice Campbell Says:
   November 18th, 2024 at 1:39 pm

   Beautiful and poignant.

8. Alma Cole Pesiri Says:
   November 18th, 2024 at 1:47 pm

   So many can relate…so many loved pets…ours was a beautiful golden Manx who now grows cherries…love your poem

9. Kathabela Wilson Says:
   November 18th, 2024 at 6:40 pm

   Love that Barrie!!!

10. Mimi Ahern Says:
    November 20th, 2024 at 6:43 am

    another haiku of yours that touches me so

11. Mimi Ahern Says:
    November 20th, 2024 at 6:44 am

    another haiku of yours that touches me so
    Mimi

12. Michael Smeer Says:
    November 22nd, 2024 at 11:32 am

    A wonderfully written haiku with great visuals presenting a very sad story… I have featured it at MyHaikuPond! 😇🐸

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