roaming the boardwalk to the end of summer romance
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Barrie Levine
Barrie Levine retired from her divorce law and mediation practice in 2016. During the pandemic, she discovered short form haiku and immersed herself in the practice, a life-affirming discovery. In her seventies, she published her first poetry collection this year entitled COTTON MOON: haiku and senryu.
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I love how this monoku itself feels like a leisurely walk along the boardwalk and then comes to a sudden end, perfectly mirroring the movement of its subject matter. Wonderful!
Beautiful, Barrie.
Thank you for complimenting my boardwalk poem.
the context of the boardwalk as a seasonal departure from one’s practical, unromantic “real life” works so well in this terrific monoku!
Thank you Barbara for your perspective on and appreciation of my poem.
I love how this monoku itself feels like a leisurely walk along the boardwalk and then comes to a sudden end, perfectly mirroring the movement of its subject matter. Wonderful!
Thank you so much for your appreciation of my boardwalk poem.