afterthoughts
the cricket’s voice
in deep leaves

13 Responses

  1. harrisfr Says:

    Wonderful! A delight!

  2. @MerrillGonzales Says:

    leaf colors change
    the cricket chirps more slowly

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    Good to hear crickets!

    cricket song
    the jogger crunches
    between loose gravel

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: Haiku Friends (Japan, 2003); Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)

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  4. honey Says:

    Who wants a stylus. You have to get em and put em away, and you lose em. Yuck. Nobody wants a stylus.
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  5. Cara Holman Says:

    Lovely!

    mingled voices
    a thousand crickets
    stir the breeze

    (Lunch Break, September 2012)

  6. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Very good.

  7. Peter Newton Says:

    the syncopation of evening how you say crickets

  8. martin1223 Says:

    Hi Ann,

    I’m crazy about the cricket’s voice and yours too…

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    You can't really say what is beautiful about a place, but the image of the place will remain vividly with you.

  10. martin1223 Says:

    evening shower
    the cricket chirps once

  11. Karen Newton Says:

    clear sweet image… I like it

  12. Lorna Cahall Says:

    Thanks for coming back. Your work is so lovely.
    http://www.facebook.com/HaikuCircle

  13. Référencement Says:

    Je ne suis pas complètement d'accord avec vous. Tout n'est pas tout noir ou ton blanc, c'est plus compliqué.

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