afterthoughts
the cricket’s voice
in deep leaves

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Issue 12.1 | 2 October 2012

13 Responses

  1. harrisfr Says:
    October 2nd, 2012 at 10:42 am

    Wonderful! A delight!

  2. @MerrillGonzales Says:
    October 2nd, 2012 at 11:58 am

    leaf colors change
    the cricket chirps more slowly

  3. Alan Summers Says:
    October 2nd, 2012 at 12:44 pm

    Good to hear crickets!

    cricket song
    the jogger crunches
    between loose gravel

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: Haiku Friends (Japan, 2003); Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)

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  4. honey Says:
    May 14th, 2013 at 3:31 am

    Who wants a stylus. You have to get em and put em away, and you lose em. Yuck. Nobody wants a stylus.
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  5. Cara Holman Says:
    October 2nd, 2012 at 1:01 pm

    Lovely!

    mingled voices
    a thousand crickets
    stir the breeze

    (Lunch Break, September 2012)

  6. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:
    October 2nd, 2012 at 1:30 pm

    Very good.

  7. Peter Newton Says:
    October 2nd, 2012 at 2:17 pm

    the syncopation of evening how you say crickets

  8. martin1223 Says:
    October 2nd, 2012 at 4:30 pm

    Hi Ann,

    I’m crazy about the cricket’s voice and yours too…

  9. jewelrycleaner.co.uk Says:
    January 30th, 2013 at 11:08 am

    You can't really say what is beautiful about a place, but the image of the place will remain vividly with you.

  10. martin1223 Says:
    January 30th, 2013 at 3:01 pm

    evening shower
    the cricket chirps once

  11. Karen Newton Says:
    October 3rd, 2012 at 6:13 am

    clear sweet image… I like it

  12. Lorna Cahall Says:
    October 4th, 2012 at 3:42 pm

    Thanks for coming back. Your work is so lovely.
    http://www.facebook.com/HaikuCircle

  13. Référencement Says:
    December 6th, 2012 at 7:43 am

    Je ne suis pas complètement d'accord avec vous. Tout n'est pas tout noir ou ton blanc, c'est plus compliqué.

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