Dear Jay, Your poem seems to speak to me from my recent composition, "frozen river/aura/of suspense". And "surprised/how hot love burns/in disappointment. I would be delighted to hear if you have any more to say about this. Kind wishes, Paul Heinowski
February 27th, 2013 at 1:16 pm
icy harbor
today no fishing
for compliments
February 27th, 2013 at 1:42 pm
frozen lake
her memories thaw
here and there…
February 27th, 2013 at 2:58 pm
Oh, I like this! :)
February 27th, 2013 at 4:04 pm
EXCELLENT
March 28th, 2013 at 4:10 pm
Thanks Beth, as you can see I'm a bit slow in responding to comments!
August 11th, 2013 at 9:17 am
Dear Jay, Your poem seems to speak to me from my recent composition, "frozen river/aura/of suspense". And "surprised/how hot love burns/in disappointment. I would be delighted to hear if you have any more to say about this. Kind wishes, Paul Heinowski