our memories of him
so very different
swirling snowflakes
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Cara Holman
Cara Holman writes haiku, senryu, haibun, rengay and the occasional personal essay. She lives with her family in the Pacific Northwest, and blogs at Prose Posies. http://caraholman.wordpress.com
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very nice.
The second line acts as a good pivot… nicely done!
the snowflakes swirling are wonderful to juggle many thoughts in the air., the many memories and so different too.
This is a very memorable haiku about Frosty the Snowman.
Thank you all for your comments!
So much detail in so few words.
Yes, I like also like the pivot here.
thanks your tips