frozen lake ?
her intentions
not so transparent

6 Responses

  1. Ozzie Nogg Says:

    icy harbor
    today no fishing
    for compliments

  2. Madhuri Says:

    frozen lake
    her memories thaw
    here and there…

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Oh, I like this! :)

  4. Beth Says:


  5. Jay Friedenberg Says:

    Thanks Beth, as you can see I'm a bit slow in responding to comments!

  6. Paul Heinowski Says:

    Dear Jay, Your poem seems to speak to me from my recent composition, "frozen river/aura/of suspense". And "surprised/how hot love burns/in disappointment. I would be delighted to hear if you have any more to say about this. Kind wishes, Paul Heinowski

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