frozen lake —
her intentions
not so transparent
Published by
Jay Friedenberg
Jay Friedenberg is a member of the Haiku Society of America and Spring Street Haiku Group in New York City. He is currently serving as Associate Editor for frogpond, the journal for the Haiku Society of America. He has had his work accepted in numerous U.S. and international journals and is the winner of multiple awards and honorable mentions in haiku contests. View all posts by Jay Friedenberg
icy harbor
today no fishing
for compliments
frozen lake
her memories thaw
here and there…
Oh, I like this! :)
EXCELLENT
Thanks Beth, as you can see I'm a bit slow in responding to comments!
Dear Jay, Your poem seems to speak to me from my recent composition, "frozen river/aura/of suspense". And "surprised/how hot love burns/in disappointment. I would be delighted to hear if you have any more to say about this. Kind wishes, Paul Heinowski