Roosevelt Island
the ruins of the hospital
touched by graffiti
The crumbling hospital building on Roosevelt Island used to house smallpox patients in the 19th century.
Roosevelt Island
the ruins of the hospital
touched by graffiti
The crumbling hospital building on Roosevelt Island used to house smallpox patients in the 19th century.
December 2nd, 2009 at 10:48 am
Thanks Barry for this — the word “touched” works wonders in this haiku–
and thanks so much to Tweney for sending these out. They light up my day.
December 2nd, 2009 at 11:29 am
…a surprising and suggestive third line – graffiti seen as mildew or as the hand of history or maybe the smallpox of walls…
Thank you,
Dana-Maria
December 2nd, 2009 at 12:33 pm
Your clever presentation sofens the hospitals history and all the
pain of the people there.
December 2nd, 2009 at 3:01 pm
The “touched” in this poem is surprising and invokes its opposite, I think, the “untouchable” nature of the disease, and the final dissolving of prohibition… the incongruity and loneliness of the scene as we see that it has been marked by the anonymous artist's hand as if to claim ownership of the past and what is no more to be. We view the ruins of what has ruined and isolated (lives past) and touch it emotionally and artistically in the present. Perhaps even this poem is written on the walls…
December 2nd, 2009 at 3:44 pm
Without any analysis this poem is great. It has profound depth, and I don't even know where Roosevelt Island is, but I know the end of an era when I hear it.
December 3rd, 2009 at 10:04 am
A great haiku of place. FYI–Roosevelt Island is in the East River of New York, right next to Manhattan, connected now by an aeriel tramway. It's had a couple of other names, the last one being Welfare Island up until the early 1970s when it was changed to Roosevelt.
December 3rd, 2009 at 6:04 pm
A great haiku of place. FYI–Roosevelt Island is in the East River of New York, right next to Manhattan, connected now by an aeriel tramway. It's had a couple of other names, the last one being Welfare Island up until the early 1970s when it was changed to Roosevelt.
March 10th, 2014 at 11:38 pm
New century!