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1. Sheila Sondik Says:
   January 15th, 2014 at 6:59 pm

   The rhythm of this haiku is very evocative. When I read it, the voice of the poem goes up at the end, as if widening into infinity. All with 6 short words!

2. Mark E. Says:
   January 16th, 2014 at 7:51 am

   Thank you very much Sheila! This was a bit of an experiment for me in terms of rhythm and word placement. I'm so glad it worked for you…

3. Alan Summers Says:
   January 18th, 2014 at 3:48 am

   stone
   by stone, the river
   widens

   Mark E Brager

   I like the succinct choices of word placement here. A fine six-word haiku.

   warm regards,

   Alan

4. Mark E. Says:
   January 22nd, 2014 at 12:01 pm

   Thank you very much Alan…

5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
   January 20th, 2014 at 10:43 am

   A very interesting one, despite so few words. Nice.

   marion

6. Mark E. Says:
   January 22nd, 2014 at 12:01 pm

   Thank you Marion…

7. P. Dugan Says:
   January 23rd, 2014 at 9:50 am

   Thanks Mark. This one opens to time and story as if water.

   P.

8. Mark E. Says:
   February 28th, 2014 at 7:47 am

   Thank you …

9. Glenn Ingersoll Says:
   February 8th, 2014 at 4:13 pm

   remains mysterious while seeming apropos

10. Mark E. Says:
    February 28th, 2014 at 7:47 am

    Thank you Glenn…

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