collecting stones from the river where I was baptized moonlight washes over me
—Aubrie Cox
Issue 10.2 | 20 September 2010
Just lovely! What a smooth turn from L3 through L5. Great tanka Aubrie.
wonderful tanka, Aubrie! Nice to see your poem in my in-box…
Lovely image of what was and is now.
Very nice indeed. I find myself identifying with this poem, and on more than one level. And also, I had thought Tinywords had folded and am glad to see it is alive.
a baptism of water and light; many levels to this beautiful little poem; enjoyed;
much love gillena
Lovely little poem. Hope you keep up the good work. I'd love to read a longer one based in a fantasy world!
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September 20th, 2010 at 12:19 pm
Just lovely! What a smooth turn from L3 through L5. Great tanka Aubrie.
September 20th, 2010 at 1:10 pm
wonderful tanka, Aubrie! Nice to see your poem in my in-box…
September 20th, 2010 at 9:21 pm
Lovely image of what was and is now.
September 20th, 2010 at 9:43 pm
Very nice indeed. I find myself identifying with this poem, and on more than one level. And also, I had thought Tinywords had folded and am glad to see it is alive.
September 21st, 2010 at 9:35 am
a baptism of water and light;
many levels to this beautiful little poem;
enjoyed;
much love
gillena
July 30th, 2020 at 6:06 pm
Lovely little poem. Hope you keep up the good work. I'd love to read a longer one based in a fantasy world!