summer’s end— rearranging gravel in the Zen garden
—Carol Raisfeld
Issue 10.2 | 21 September 2010
I love the implication that a sort of realignment–of the gravel, of one's life–is necessary at summer's end. This is a wonderfully suggestive haiku, Carol. Very fine work.
A calming poem for the end of my hectic day. Love it.
a nice juxtaposition of new cycles
much love gillena
summer’s end a horse races behind it’s shadow
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September 21st, 2010 at 12:59 pm
I love the implication that a sort of realignment–of the gravel, of one's life–is necessary at summer's end. This is a wonderfully suggestive haiku, Carol. Very fine work.
September 21st, 2010 at 1:45 pm
A calming poem for the end of my hectic day. Love it.
September 22nd, 2010 at 9:58 am
a nice juxtaposition of new cycles
much love
gillena
October 10th, 2010 at 8:34 am
summer’s end
a horse races behind it’s shadow