collecting stones
from the river
where I was baptized
washes over me

6 Responses

  1. Kathe L. Palka Says:

    Just lovely! What a smooth turn from L3 through L5. Great tanka Aubrie.

  2. marjorie buettner Says:

    wonderful tanka, Aubrie! Nice to see your poem in my in-box…

  3. judith Ingram Says:

    Lovely image of what was and is now.

  4. M. Nickels-Wisdom Says:

    Very nice indeed. I find myself identifying with this poem, and on more than one level. And also, I had thought Tinywords had folded and am glad to see it is alive.

  5. gillena cox Says:

    a baptism of water and light;
    many levels to this beautiful little poem;

    much love

  6. top fantasy series Says:

    Lovely little poem. Hope you keep up the good work. I'd love to read a longer one based in a fantasy world!

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