in one breath the whole autumn
—Valeria Simonova-Cecon
Issue 09.1 | 7 December 2009
Excellent, thank you. The use of senses (time, smell and even taste) of a season in a breath is well done —
Love it!
very nice… captures the haiku moment.
Yes!
Greg, columbusmatt, thank you vey much :)
thank you. and for the one-line of it. marlene
Hi Valeria,
I love this one liner, it's succinct and it should trigger off powerful images and experiences in a good way.
Alanhttp://www.withwords.org.uk
I love the simplicity and complexity all in one! Great poem
yes, it is all in one deep breath, this poem, as if together, we enter the forest alive with autumn.
hard to respond to something so lovely in its brevity without great brevity, but I don't just want to write that I love this–it's sensory exactness is enviable. bravo.
I'm moved by your kind words, thank you very much.
Exquisite.
This is one of the poems that show the beautifulness of the genre – so much said in just a few words…. Thanks for sharing this one :))
It's magical!
Indeed very nice…:)
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December 7th, 2009 at 11:05 am
Excellent, thank you. The use of senses (time, smell and even taste) of a season in a breath is well done —
December 7th, 2009 at 11:48 am
Love it!
December 7th, 2009 at 12:26 pm
very nice… captures the haiku moment.
December 7th, 2009 at 1:15 pm
Yes!
December 7th, 2009 at 2:44 pm
Greg, columbusmatt, thank you vey much :)
December 7th, 2009 at 4:32 pm
thank you. and for the one-line of it. marlene
December 8th, 2009 at 5:06 am
Hi Valeria,
I love this one liner, it's succinct and it should trigger off powerful images and experiences in a good way.
Alan
http://www.withwords.org.uk
December 8th, 2009 at 8:02 am
I love the simplicity and complexity all in one! Great poem
December 8th, 2009 at 8:26 am
yes, it is all in one deep breath, this poem, as if together, we enter the forest alive with autumn.
December 9th, 2009 at 2:10 pm
hard to respond to something so lovely in its brevity without great brevity, but I don't just want to write that I love this–it's sensory exactness is enviable. bravo.
December 11th, 2009 at 7:23 am
I'm moved by your kind words, thank you very much.
December 18th, 2009 at 9:16 am
Exquisite.
December 18th, 2009 at 5:16 pm
Exquisite.
December 18th, 2009 at 5:16 pm
Exquisite.
June 29th, 2010 at 5:32 am
This is one of the poems that show the beautifulness of the genre – so much said in just a few words…. Thanks for sharing this one :))
August 17th, 2010 at 1:01 am
It's magical!
March 10th, 2014 at 11:31 pm
Exquisite.
November 28th, 2014 at 2:41 am
Indeed very nice…:)