king sized bed room enough for separate dreams
—Michelle Schaefer
Issue 16.1 | 3 May 2016
Excellent!
Yes.
separate beds in the morning we share the same dream
I like the way this haiku has "room enough" for different interpretations. Are the separate dreams a sign of alienation in the relationship, or the hallmark of a healthy partnership?
I also like the openness of this one.
marion
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May 3rd, 2016 at 11:51 am
Excellent!
May 3rd, 2016 at 4:21 pm
Yes.
May 4th, 2016 at 12:11 am
separate beds
in the morning we share
the same dream
May 9th, 2016 at 7:11 pm
I like the way this haiku has "room enough" for different interpretations. Are the separate dreams a sign of alienation in the relationship, or the hallmark of a healthy partnership?
May 23rd, 2016 at 4:16 am
I also like the openness of this one.
marion